Point of View in Fiction: A Guide for Novelists

When you sit down to write a story, one of your first decisions needs to be which character(s) will be telling the story – this your novel’s point of view (POV). This decision will shape every word on the page. Get it right and your readers will sink happily into the narrative. Get it wrong and they may find themselves confused, disconnected, or worse, tempted to put the book down.

As a fiction editor, I spend a lot of time helping authors refine their point of view. It’s not just a technical choice. It’s the lens through which readers experience your story.

Point of view is about picking the narrator(s) and then picking the way you will handle their voice (first person, second person, omniscient etc.).

What is Point of View in Fiction?

Point of view in fiction simply means the narrative perspective – the position from which your story is told. It’s like choosing a camera angle for a film. Do we stay close to one character’s head? Do we pan across multiple characters? Or do we step back and take the bird’s-eye view?

Understanding POV is essential because it controls:

• What information readers have access to
• How close readers feel to characters
• The tone and intimacy of the narrative

The Main Types of Point of View in Fiction

Once you’ve picked which character is going to be telling the story, you need to decide how this POV character will be handled. There are several ways to categorise this, but here are the three big ones fiction writers use most often.

1. First Person POV

This is when the narrator is a character within the story, using I or we. For example: I never thought I’d survive that night.

• Pros: Intimate, immediate, emotional. Readers feel like they’re inside the character’s shoes, experiencing events in real time.
• Cons: You can only show what that character sees, hears and knows. If your character doesn’t know something (or hasn’t seen something) then neither can your readers. It can feel limiting if your story is big in scope.

2. Third Person Limited POV

Here the narrator uses he, she, or they, but the story is filtered through the perspective of one character at a time. Example: She tightened her grip on the letter, heart pounding.

• Pros: Offers closeness to a character, but with a little more flexibility than first person.
• Cons: You still can’t reveal anything outside the chosen character’s knowledge – unless you switch viewpoints (which is absolutely possible but needs careful handling).

3. Third Person Omniscient POV

The all-knowing narrator. This voice can dip in and out of characters’ minds, provide commentary, and reveal information the characters themselves don’t know.

• Pros: Huge scope, great for sweeping, multi-generational stories.
• Cons: Very tricky to pull off and can feel distant/disconnected if not handled well. Modern readers often prefer a tighter perspective.

Common POV Mistakes (and How to Avoid Them)

As an editor, these are the slip-ups I see most often:

Head-Hopping

This happens when the narrative jumps from one character’s thoughts to another character’s thoughts in the same scene without warning. Readers get dizzy trying to keep up.
Fix: Stick with one character’s perspective per scene or chapter.

Inconsistent Distance

Sometimes the writing zooms into microscopic detail (a character’s heartbeat), then suddenly zooms out to godlike commentary, all within a few lines.
Fix: Choose your distance deliberately and maintain it, unless there’s a clear reason to shift.

Forgetting Limitations

If you’re writing first person or third person limited, your character can’t know what others are secretly thinking. This is called dropped point of view.
Fix: Remember that POV is a filter. Everything is seen, heard, or inferred by the viewpoint character.

How to Choose the Right Point of View for Your Story

When working out which POV to use, maybe consider the following questions:

• Whose story is this really? If the answer is one strong character, consider first person or third person limited.
• Do you want intimacy or distance? For intimacy, go close. For scope, go wider.
• How much information do readers need (and when)? If big reveals hinge on limited knowledge, keep the POV tight.

Remember, there’s no universal “best” choice. The right POV is the one that serves your story’s needs.

FAQs About POV in Fiction

1. What is the easiest POV for beginners?

Many new writers start with first person because it feels natural – like journaling. But third person limited is often easier to sustain over a whole novel, since it gives you slightly more flexibility.

2. Can I switch POVs in a novel?

Yes, but do it with intention. Many novels use multiple viewpoints, but ideally each switch should happen at a clear break – such as a new chapter – so readers don’t feel pulled out of the story.

3. Is second person POV ever a good idea?

Second person (using you) is rare in fiction, but it can be powerful in experimental or literary work. For commercial fiction, it’s usually a tough sell.

4. Why does POV affect my writing style?

Because the narrative perspective shapes word choice, sentence structure and tone. A child narrator will describe things differently to an omniscient voice. POV isn’t just about pronouns – it’s about mindset.

Final Thoughts: POV as Your Story’s Lens

Point of view in writing isn’t just a technical choice – it’s the emotional gateway for your readers. A tight first person draws them in really close to your main character, while an expansive omniscient voice lets them see the world from above.

If you don’t know which POV to pick, you could try writing the same scene from different perspectives. You might find that one way is much easier to write, and this will bring more energy to your narrative.

Please do get in touch if you have any questions!